This week end I have been trying to write a story , It looks so simple. But even with the limited 12 spread format there are so many options. I can’t even stick to a tense, Past tense feels natural when you are narrating but it it robs you of immediacy and makes every thing sound like memoirs . Does the past tense or present tense make story about pre school cannibalism more acceptable ? I wonder what a story in the future tense would sound like. Anyway here’s a new picture, Watch Out I am going to eat you all up.!!